ExSPlug Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 You too...had much fun in that one.By the way...can we go and apply for Guniess record for the shortest and most intense Kanly battle? :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted July 21, 2004 Share Posted July 21, 2004 Indeed :)Watch Out...I'll be back... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord J Posted July 22, 2004 Share Posted July 22, 2004 Indeed, very good fight from the both of you. I think it deserves a record ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ordos45 Posted July 22, 2004 Share Posted July 22, 2004 Oh yeah...thanks for reminding me Tamerlane. Corporate Wars has begun! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EWS Posted July 31, 2004 Share Posted July 31, 2004 Espionage 4 is up. Everyone check it out, we want a big turnout on this one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Posted August 3, 2004 Share Posted August 3, 2004 Says you. POST, boy!Edit: Dragoon! Your turn now! *Cracks whip* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostHunter Posted August 18, 2004 Share Posted August 18, 2004 Lmao, nice story Apoll, I got a real good laugh out of it. ;DI especially liked:"Eddins! You distract it, while I run away!" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bryorama Posted August 18, 2004 Share Posted August 18, 2004 LOL !Liked those lines. ::) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Posted August 26, 2004 Share Posted August 26, 2004 I worked damn hard on my most recent short story (not the werewolf one) so if people would be so kind as to tell me what they think (truthfully) I would appreciate it. Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollyon Posted August 27, 2004 Share Posted August 27, 2004 I'm going to read through all of them and do some thorough criticism on Saturday.Oh and thanks, GhostHunter, glad you liked it. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollyon Posted August 28, 2004 Share Posted August 28, 2004 Critique 1Truth Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Posted October 2, 2004 Share Posted October 2, 2004 Come on, people! House Wayku is the first Dune fic for a while, and the first posts were really good. Let's keep at it, jah? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nemafakei Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 " Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollyon Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 Oh, and a little belated, but I probably ought to take issue with"But = yet. Yet = but. Choose one or the other"Yet is not restricted in meaning. Considering the reordering "Tears continued to shed from his eyes but she stood calmly yet.", you can observe that the 'yet' can act as an intensifier with a suggestion of temporal meaning. Oh, and the word has yet more uses to which I have yet to refer, but they're not relevant. Yet.LinkStylistically, it's a load of crap, so your disputing the point is more or less entirely pointless. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nemafakei Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 The link is very funny. Was it a deliberate mistake (follow link youself if you don't get it)?To what, precisely, do you refer when you say "it"? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollyon Posted October 25, 2004 Share Posted October 25, 2004 Heheheh. Dodgy code tag, but that is funny.It = the use of 'but yet'. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nemafakei Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 Fair enough, I'll leave style to those who claim to be stylish.I just didn't like the definitive implications of "But = yet. Yet = but". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollyon Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 Very well. I'll leave the definitions to those who are pedantic. ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Leaf Posted October 29, 2004 Share Posted October 29, 2004 Apollyon's Vicious Fabric...HAH! I almost laughed, and I don't usually laugh. The story was frigging funny! ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollyon Posted October 30, 2004 Share Posted October 30, 2004 Thanks. Glad you enjoyed. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Posted December 7, 2004 Share Posted December 7, 2004 Wow, no one replied to this thread in a while.I was thinking for the arrakis factions thread, maybe you want to use a map, so that it is easier to visualise where you are talking about.http://users.eastlink.ca/~andrewabc/jihad/Has a map already labelled with most locations actually having a name to the number/letter.Ignore the army numbers and faction colours.Stats page has the name of location (where available), and maps page has the map.Just a thought in case you think it will improve the fanfic. Although I would think it might get tedious checking out where exactly a location is, and then someon saying "no I was over there".But whatever. Feel free to make references to the map. Maybe you will get hooked. heheheOr use one of the many other Dune maps that are floating around labelled.http://www.duneworld.org/books/map.html is best example. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Posted December 7, 2004 Share Posted December 7, 2004 I just used the map in the book... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Posted December 7, 2004 Share Posted December 7, 2004 Not everyone the original/first book. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Ok, you wanted an undead fic, here's an undead fic! Join! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Or die...Or Join and...Um...Be...a dead! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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