HELP PLZ

[syeline]

i really need to come up with a platoon motto. plz help me. make like a 3-4 line chant if you would be so kind to help. i really wanna get the xtra merit points for this. BUT I HAVE A MENTAL BLOCK.

[Dante]

Mottos are slightly different from chants, but anyway...

We need to know a bit more. What's the subject matter supposed to be? Strength at arms? Loyalty? The idiocy of an authority figure?

And what kind of chant? Something to just repeat over and over?

Hmm... I'd suggest you take a few lines from 'It's a fine life' from the musical Oliver but that's just me... E.g:

If you don't mind having to like or lump it, it's a fine life! It's a fine life!

Though there's no tea-sippin' and eatin' crumpets, it's a fine life! It's a fine life!

Though you sometimes do come by,

The occasional black eye,

You can always cover one

While he blacks the other one,

But you don't dare cry!

...Ok, so you have to know the tune. But provided you don't get sued for copyright infringement it seems as good as any.

Oh, and I did maul the verses a bit to put those bits together. I'm sorry.

[Cyborg]

This is a rather funny verse from Status Quo's In the army now

Hand grenades flying over your head

Missiles flying over your head

If you want to survive get out of bed

You

[syeline]

there is no subject. we just need a chant. strength or mentality or stuff like that would be great. lol i really hope im the first one to bring in a motto so i can get da credit and get the merits :D

u guys r a gr8 help

[Caid Ivik]

Take up the flags

Our ranks are tightly closed

Platoon marches

With calm and stronger step

Souls of the comrades

Shot by al-Caida and Iraq

March in our ranks

And are along in step!

music...

[thomas]

As the enemy advances

I shall not lay down my arms

I shall stay with my brethren

and be the last to fall

good?

[Jack Leaf]

Take up the flags

Our ranks are tightly closed

Platoon marches

With calm and stronger step

Souls of the comrades

Shot by al-Caida and Iraq

March in our ranks

And are along in step!

music...

HAHA! I guess they won't really appreciate that...  ;)

[Caid Ivik]

Who knows, perhaps their obersturmbannfuhrer likes neofolk  ;D

[Jack Leaf]

"The street free for the camoflouged battalions,

The street free for the American saviours.

Millions full of hope; look up at the fifty stars;

The day breaks for freedom and super markets."

... that was continuation for Caid Ivik's suggestion.  ;)

[The_Sadukar]

Sadly though it seems you parody is more true than it should be.

[syeline]

lol guys. no fighting stuff. the fighting for my country doesnt fly with sgt. i already tried one today. just some thing to give or platoon spirit and something to say as we march. good tries. ill see if i can edit your stuff to make it appropriate REMEMBER IM IN A HIGH SCHOOL lol

[GUNWOUNDS]

REMEMBER IM IN A HIGH SCHOOL lol

yea we know

[Caid Ivik]

Actually, the first part of the song is only about empathy of you, internal vanguard with the frontline soldiers  ;D