Aribites Posted April 11, 2002 Share Posted April 11, 2002 This is my first fanfic, so please give me a bit of leniancy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aribites Posted April 11, 2002 Author Share Posted April 11, 2002 Dune, the sand planet. Storms are rare, but when they do occur, they can cause widespread destruction. One such storm was in progress as the 10th Sardaukar Regiment made planetfall.2 dozen carryalls screamed through the stormy cloads, lightning and rain flashing around them. Landing thrusters screamed under pressure, and as one the carryalls thumped to the ground. Clamps were released and APCs with the insignia of house Corrino sped off into the gloom. Thrusters flared and the carryalls wer gone. The only thing that would have told you that they had been there was the burnt and blackened grass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aribites Posted April 11, 2002 Author Share Posted April 11, 2002 The APCs sped on through the night, and soon they reached their destination, a refugee holding area where deserters from the recently defeated 3rd Penal Army of Corrino were 'hiding' under the protection of rebel forces. Before sentries could raise the alarm, the APC's were in the centre of the camp, their hull mounted guns mowing down rebels as they poured out of the barracks.A few seconds later, the Sardaukar piled out of the back of the armoured vehicles. Each squad of 4 was led by a Sardaukar elite. Each squad made their way around the camp, mercilessly killing all that they saw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aribites Posted April 11, 2002 Author Share Posted April 11, 2002 No mercy was given, for these men that they now slew were deserters, men whom they had trusted and thought of as friends, and who know would be fighting for the enemy. "For the emperor!" shouted one Sardaukar trooper as he machine gunned a deserter full in the face.The same scene was being repeated all over the camp. Soon, only one man remained alive from the deserters camp, their leader. Escorted by 4 Sardaukar elites, he was brought to kneel before the Sardaukar commander."I can explain all!" he pleaded pitifully."There is nothing to explain, only that accept the order of the Emperor, redeeming yourself in his eye!?" Replied the Commander."I repent" The man answered, stern faced now."It shall be done!" As the Sardaukar commander said this, he pulled his laser knife from his belt, and quikly slit the mans throat, reddeming him as he did so, "There is much to be done, let us leave!"The APCs sped away, leaving the destruction behind them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dunenewt Posted April 12, 2002 Share Posted April 12, 2002 and where is this story going... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aribites Posted April 12, 2002 Author Share Posted April 12, 2002 Nowehere, at the moment, i'm eating............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dunenewt Posted April 17, 2002 Share Posted April 17, 2002 ...and then the Sardukar were ambushed by a crack team of Ixian commandoes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aribites Posted April 17, 2002 Author Share Posted April 17, 2002 And kick their arse horribly, leaving no survivors, and taking no casualties!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calaban_emperor Posted April 17, 2002 Share Posted April 17, 2002 Then somebody drops a nuke and they're all dead ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sly1 Posted April 17, 2002 Share Posted April 17, 2002 The filthy Tilaxeau come and raid the bodies of the fallen. They then serve them kippered with pickels and pork chops at the Facedancer Ball(where you never know just who your getting into bed with! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burseg_candor Posted April 17, 2002 Share Posted April 17, 2002 then the tliaxu get horrid stomache cramps and the sardaukar burst out of their stomaches (think aliens) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vladimir_Harkonnen Posted April 17, 2002 Share Posted April 17, 2002 Stomach bursting Sarduakar, LOL i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aribites Posted April 18, 2002 Author Share Posted April 18, 2002 The chestbursting Sardaukar spray all their enemies with machine gun rounds, rupturing organs and blowing them apart....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dunenewt Posted April 18, 2002 Share Posted April 18, 2002 and a group of Ixian tanks arrive and win that battle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sly1 Posted May 27, 2002 Share Posted May 27, 2002 Then the Powerpuff girls come and destroy them all. ::) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Sadukar Posted May 29, 2002 Share Posted May 29, 2002 And just as the powerpuff grils think they are victorius, 10 zillions of sadukars arrive, and and start to take over the Dunivers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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