NEED HELP elves story!!!

[zilents]

Guys I need help to complete my short story about elves for my final project (drawing class)... the Idea is creating a short story, then I draw some of the great scenes. I did the beginning but I need a good story line, climax in the middle and compelling ends.

Pour all your imagination... and if u can pls correct some of my grammar =)

Once upon a time, all the elves lived in the upper world, a great peaceful kingdom ruled by a wise king & a pure hearted queen. The land is so prosperous that the envious human race desire to own the land. Humans are the only being beside parasites that does not co-exists with his surrounding. Whenever they come, every single source is exploited then the land is abandoned. In many ways, humans tried to deceit the elves. Yet the elves are a peaceful creature, they do anything in their power to avoid conflict. One day, the king of human race gathered his army and preparing to attack the elves. Guided by an evil witch, human race succeed the great battle, the elves suffers a great loss, King of elves died in effort to defend his kingdom, nevertheless the pregnant Queen survived and running away to the magical forest with her faithful servants and guards... bla bla bla (pls help)

My next idea basiclly the survived elves making a new colony in the magical forest, hiding.. then young prince born and grew up in the forest... until one day he is told by his mother that the original elves are not live in the forest.. once elves had a huge green pasteur, grass land where animals can run free, and elves can see the clouds and the sun clearly... then the prince get into a combat training and learning magic spells... then he do a surveillance in the old kingdom once was owned by his father.. then he met a beautifull princess, daughter of the human king, fell in love at the first sight. The queen warned him not to go on with his feeling, remmembering of what human did in the past... then I'M STUCK!!!

So basiclly the end should be elves and human race are united.

HELP... HELP... HELP...!!! my project due on monday but I need to make the drawing like today!!!

[Navaros]

you seem to have done a great job so far of stealing everything from War3, might as well go play it some more and steal your ending from there too rather than from us ::)

[Ice_Cube]

Nav why are you such a jerk? Anyways, I am not really the story person, but it looks like you will need to have some kind of dangerous infiltration into the witches/kings lair/castle (whatever) and be aided by the princess. If it is the witch then kill/banish her and maybe the spell on the king is broken or whatever.

I don't think it really matters if the details aren't that strong but if you make sure the plot is clear and the ending is ok, then it will be a good short story. Good so far.....

[zilents]

you seem to have done a great job so far of stealing everything from War3, might as well go play it some more and steal your ending from there too rather than from us ::)

Heh??? I dont recall my story is from Warcraft 3... well yes its typical story about elves and human but thats wat I got so far... btw instead of spamming eveyonelses thread.. why dont u help a bit... this might be your first call =)

[Caid Ivik]

Why are the races so united? Make some factions, i.e. some dark cults.

[bryorama]

Should this be moved to Fan Fiction?

[exatreide]

well of course. Everything should be moved to fan fiction....where i can control it mwahahahha....mwahaha......jk.....yea..

But this should. Hey hows did it go?

[bryorama]

Well, you can move it can't ya? Well, i got da crane.. lol

[Ice_Cube]

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[bryorama]

lol nice.

[FireSnake]

you seem to have done a great job so far of stealing everything from War3, might as well go play it some more and steal your ending from there too rather than from us ::)

Oh yeah, sure. And Blizzard has never ever ever stolen nothang from Tolkien's work. Nuh-uh. Blizzard Enterteinment is so original. Yessirree-bob. They're so original that no one can steal their stuff...

- Matthew