GhostHunter Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 New short story, looking for any commentary so please, if you read it even the slightest, give me some word, thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bryorama Posted June 7, 2004 Share Posted June 7, 2004 Very well written, nice details and such. A+ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanguard3000 Posted June 7, 2004 Share Posted June 7, 2004 Agreed. Very well done. I hope there's more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Sadukar Posted June 7, 2004 Share Posted June 7, 2004 As do I Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bryorama Posted June 8, 2004 Share Posted June 8, 2004 And I have to add: nice grammar, and use of italics, and I'm unsure if you used bold anywhere. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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bryorama Posted June 15, 2004 Share Posted June 15, 2004 Wow, this makes me feel bad and such. But that's good, I read it over and over again. ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
desert_storm Posted July 1, 2004 Share Posted July 1, 2004 good stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbarossa Posted July 6, 2004 Share Posted July 6, 2004 Kick Arse! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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