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a little Warhammer 40k piece


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not yet completed but here's what I have thus far

: The black beast lurched forward; belching out thick black smoke, as Private Joe Adamsky of the 104th Cadian Ivy Angels slammed his thick black boot onto the accelerator. The black Leman Russ had scores of bullet holes and scorch marks defacing her once beautiful black and gray camouflage exterior.

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Copper armour would be rather dangerous, I think. Also, you need work on grammar.

Despite that, I thought it was well-written with good, suitably written points of progression. It was an enjoyable read so nice job.


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