Mobile War

[rogue1896]

*Caution!*

Read at own risk. Stories may be too long for those without good concentration. ;D

I wrote these stories and they were edited by pro. he took/takes (i don't remember) a creative writing course so he knows more about this shit than i do. well, have fun.

[rogue1896]

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*THE FOLLOWING IS RATED PG-13 FOR VIOLENCE*

[rogue1896]

This is my last one so far. I haven't even finished it all yet.

[rogue1896]

Don't be TOO critical here. lol, if "he" was still here "he"'d call me some kind of sadistic anti-christian or something. lol. i'm NOT crazy for the record, i just had way too much free time ;)

[ExSPlug]

Woot a gundam one...this one even destoryed the gundam with amuro, now that's fun...

Some parts are contracdicting with the original story though...

Core fighters are never mass producted. Too expensive. I suggest you change them to FF-6 Tin.

Amuro got into the Gundam by accident. He didn't even know that it the MS he's in is called Gundam nor know it's superior to a Zaku.

[rogue1896]

i know, it's alternate storyline. that's why i decided to obliterate amuro ;D i am the master of their destiny. i control their fate.

and about the core fighters being mass produced, again, it's alternate storyline. i even made my own mobile suit. w00t for the Nighthawk.

[rogue1896]

i kinda figured no one would read it. i've posted this on a total of 3 or 4 forums so far and i've gotten a grand total of about 4 replies. :'( too long, huh...

[exatreide]

no its good.

I enjoy it. :)

nice writing styl