Apollyon Posted October 27, 2002 Share Posted October 27, 2002 As im not a big poetry writer but have written quite a few stories (not here) I thought I'd try my hand. Please tell me what you think. =)Fallen AngelFor on that night it was unleashed,And behold and thus it never ceased,My anger pain and vengeance sweet,That burn within to the drummers beat.And on that night my wrath was found,And he found me and didst surround,My fears and laments did he tell,And whisper as a funeral bell.Conclusion came, the answer clear,Become, I would, the source of fear,And now I shreak and scream in pain,The remnants of a world insane.For these, my fears so clearly painted,Are the deathly blow of being tainted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VigilVirus Posted October 28, 2002 Share Posted October 28, 2002 Nice :).Here's my best poem I ever wrote:The city of silence by Vladimir The city stands empty and silent.The beautiful skyscrapers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Usul Posted November 4, 2002 Share Posted November 4, 2002 Here's my best:Why?Why do we fightWhy do we dieIs it rightShould we have to say good bye?Why is there warWhy is there painIs there not lawSo why do they die in vainWhy are there richWhy are there poorthe rich get the golden stichthe poor get the floorWhy is there loveWhy is there hateWhy do we shovecan we not wait?Why is the past always forgotentime goes by so fastinside we are rottenLife is a gamewhere we all losethe stakes are the samewe cannot chooseWhen will it endwhen did it start?Can we menda broken heart?These are the questions whichwe can never answerwe're in a ditchdown in the sewerDoes life have a meaningIs there a God?Shoud we be leaning to money in a wadWhy is there prejudiceWhy is there hateCan't we give it a missSay it's not to our tasteCan we not livein peace and happinesfilter through a siveall this nastynessNow I will end this poem so trueIt made me think and so should youComments? Critisisms? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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