I wrote a song... again (Dune songy)

[Jack Leaf]

Yup. It's far away from the last, as it was love song and this is battle song... Dune battle song.

Please comment it, I don't fear negative feedback. By the way, the name is "Ya Hya Chouhada".

I can see the ranks of the Fremen

Fearless warriors of the desert

Ride the Shai Hulud, live without water

In the planet Arrakis, also known as Dune

They fight and yell my name

Believing that I will give them freedom

But I believe only in revenge of blood

O-oh, Are they fighting in vain?

Ya Hya Chouhada!

Ya Hya Chouhada!

The Fremen fight without showing or feeling fear

Like killing machines Sardaukars that fight back with iron fist

The Fremen spill their water but instead of water this battleground is filled with blood

Ya Hya Chouhada!

Ya Hya Chouhada!

Smoke, fire and dust covers the battlefield

Terror flies and no one is safe

I can hear distant voice yelling 'For the prophet Muad'dib!'

But it fades away and then I can hear only screaming

After all

Muad'dib is just a mouse

This Jihad will never end

Everything we do is destruction and suffering

No one will win

But everyone will lose

We are fighting in vain

But then I see them again

Ya Hya Chouhada!

Ya Hya Chouhada!

Lasers blast

Tanks roll

Swords flash and blood spills

Some day we will claim Arrakis as our own

From the dead hand of Harkonnen or not

The kingdom will come

Ya Hya Chouhada!

Ya Hya Chouhada!

No one can survive alive!

Ya Hya Chouhada!

Ya Hya Chouhada!

The kingdom will come!

Ya Hya Chouhada!

Feel free to call it whatever you want.

[lowzeewee]

Nice,very nice. :D

[The_Sadukar]

good...very good...

[nemafakei]

I don't understand the metre.