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Tamed Hunter. Please, I ask you to read this.

Jack Leaf

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Jack Leaf

Jack Leaf

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Here we are. 6 pages with Arial font, size 12. Yeah, the creature in this story IS Yautja from Predator movies. When designing this story, predator sounded the most logical. Making new samelike would sound stupid, I think. At least it's Predator fan fiction now. :P

The beginning is way better than the end. I'm sorry for that, but maybe I will fix the end sometime in the future... yeah...

Sampsa Lehti

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Tamed Hunter

I have experienced one thing in my life that no one else has. It

Apollyon

Apollyon

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The actual story, while very basic, is quite enjoyable. Your language needs some work, but that's understandable considering your age and that English is not your first language. :)

On the whole, very good.

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