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  1. As I quoted in my email the voice could have been put to use in a much better way . What do you people think???
  2. Exactly what I said in my email, its just stupid the little mistakes that have been made that spoil the game. If in the game Paul had been able to use his knife one on one when he was spotted, the game would have been inproved %100, they could have made the game so that he pulls off some cool combo or something when fighting but no........ Where left with: Pauls been spotted he's got no ammo, better go kill the stupid Harkonen with the knife. Pauls approaches Troop and then waves his knife in the air as if trying to swat some fly's because he cant hit the Harkonen effectivly because of the way the games been programmed and gets blasted until he's nearly dead, then the crappy voice kicks in and stuns the Harkonen allowing you to finish him off with a stealth attack... but after all that you think well whats the point. :-
  3. Cant find my email attachment must have vanished so here it is again in case any game programmers fancy having a go at making it right ;): Dam its long :O Frank Herbert's Dune email: To any one who is connected to the development of Frank Herbert's Dune, where do I start with this game it could have been one of the greatest games ever putting the dune universe where it should be in the games community. The game could have been so much more but it's the little bugs in the game, which make it go wrong. If a little more thought had been put in this game would have been brilliant. The way it looks is superb I gave you top marks for presentation and graphics. The way the characters look and are dressed is perfect. I like the kind of Manga touch you have given them it really suites the atmosphere. But although the game looks perfect it has some minor problems, which prevent it from being the game it should have been. Maybe you could bring out a PATCH to fix the problems and make the fans of your work and Dune happy. Some of the main problems: When you only have your Knife and you are spotted it is almost impossible to kill any one as they keep shooting and moving backwards whilst you try and get close enough to use the knife however even if you do get close enough the knife doesn't do much. Games are supposed to be fun that means I should be able to kill him with the Knife even though ive been spotted with some kind of cool combo. It only annoys the player that you can't kill the bad guy. There's some kind of problem with the camera sometimes if you load the game and use the mouse option for the camera it wont work Making either impossible to play the game or forcing you to use the auto camera option which doesn't really work as you cant see what's going on around you. The user cant skip the cut scenes which is annoying as hell, after watching them once some people don't want to watch them over and over again. The pilots in the Harkonnen base can walk straight through you where as other characters don't. Sometimes if you climb up onto an object you can get stuck with no way of getting down you are forced to start the level over from scratch which means you've got to load your save game again because there's no restart level option. On top of this you've got to watch the cut scenes again. When using the gun it only shoots in certain directions due to the auto targeting system. This makes it hard to kill the people you want. And also awkward when sometimes you have to kill people quickly. Perhaps it would have been better if there wasn't an auto targeting system so you could just guide a crosshair to the target with the mouse and shoot or at least let the user decide if they want to use auto targeting or not. You could alternatively have a way of cycling through the different targets however I think the crosshair would be the best. When hiding behind walls the bad guys spot you anyway which kind of takes away the point of trying to be stealthy. Hit man has good system for shooting and stealth the same method could have been used in dune (The way Paul hides behind the wall to stealth people sucks it just dosent work, Ever tried it in hitman Dam it so easy also adds to the fun.) There are no quick save options meaning when you die you have to start all the way from the beginning again. When you play through the game there is no way of going back to play previous missions except to play right through the game again. Some of the animations in the game need touching up slightly. Things you could have done to improve the game: The Voice basically sucks in the game (A pink purple force field appears round him saving him from certain death.) You could have done so much more with this if you had thought about it a bit more. You could have used Paul's powers to more effect in the game by being more accurate to the film. For instance the voice is supposed to allow Paul to command people into doing what he wants. You could have done this by some how targeting the bad guy (Similar to how the force powers work in Dark Forces 2: Jedi Knight or its new sequel Jedi Knight 2 Outcast) Once the bad guy is targeted Paul could use the voice to summon him making the bad guy walk mindlessly towards him. Where finally Paul could finish him off using one of his stealth moves. Using the same targeting system you could have targeted one bad guy, telling him with the voice to kill another target that you select. The voice could have also been used to work more with the stealth system for instance you could have had a mission where Paul had to get inside some guarded area with out been seen you could have used the targeting system to select the bad guy and then have Paul say something which puts the guard into a trance where you then can simply walk past with out being seen or you could have the option to kill him. In the new mini series Paul has the ability to move super fast the could have been another power he could have used. You could have used slow motion action like in Max Payne to allow Paul to dodge bullets or other objects matrix style. These are just a few examples of the powers, which could have been used in the game to help make it more fun and interesting many more powers could still be thought of. Paul could have been made to perform more things like jump, sneak, crouch and crawl. I like the fact that in your game Paul is very agile kind of like a ninja he has the right body shape and everything this is good its how I imagine Paul would be in my imagination. There could have been a bigger selection of weapons you could have even used the voice-activated guns that were seen in the original David Lynch movie where to activate the gun they have to shout. You could have used the mouse button to charge the power and distance of the shot. If the movie these guns are supposed to be extra ordinarily powerful with the ability to smash blocks of the hardest stone in to a million pieces. The shield armour could have been used. Although it could not be used in the open deserts of Arrakis because it attracts worms there is no reasons why it could not be used inside of buildings and other structures on dune. The Atreidies palace itself was protected by a shield wall to protect it from storms from the desert. Some kind of special martial arts duel with these and the knives would be out of this world. Some kind of duelling system would also be nice so if you were ever challenged by another who had knife you could have a good one on one. Why not have some kind of futuristic sniper rifle. The stealth attacks in the game are already really good but you could improve them even more by adding stealth attacks that change within the environment for example If say a smuggler was standing on guard near a cliff edge have Paul sneak up on him and push him off the edge. Small things like this can make the game all that more entertaining. When Paul uses the Kryst Knife he only uses one or two moves why not make a whole range of moves to go with the knife. Such as multiple combo's using the wielding way you hear so much about in the books. The reason the knife is the main weapon in the dune universe is due to the shield armour as only a slow moving object has the ability to enter the shield. Thus the knife became the most commonly used weapon to be carried alongside the shield armour in the dune universe. You could have used this somewhere in your game. On the first level with the worm which looks spectacular ive got to say. You cant really tell where your going. It would have been better if you had looked away from the worm so you could see the sand colour you needed to run on and mixed a few cut scenes with it at least you'd be able to tell where to go and if you wanted to you could simply turn around and look at the worm If you wanted. In the game there is no multiplayer support, which would have been a great option to have. This would have made the game bigger and last longer. People also seem to love creating new Models, skins and maps, which would have kept interests the game for years as well as help expanding the universe. This also goes for creating single player levels as well. Although the way the characters look in your game is great I do think Rabban looks a bit silly but never mind you made up for it with the rest of the characters who are almost perfect. Good Uniforms and everything. You could have made the characters at least seem as though they have individual personalities. Everyone's so dull and straightforward in the movies and games which is not how I imagined them being from reading the books. I have to admit though Paul was just perfect good voice and everything. It would have been good if you heard the guards have conversations among each other when they're on guard duty. When your sneaking up on them. Another Idea which I have discussed with other people in the Dune2k.com forum is that when you kill people it would have been better if ammo could have been taken from them. Dune is only developed slightly through the books they gave us the original concept, background and story. However not a lot is explained about other regions of the dune universe. About different aliens, robots and technology that are in the universe It would be good if the games started to expand the Dune universe as star wars has with its Dark forces and Jedi Knight series. How about making a Dune game set in the war against the thinking machines. How about creating a new dune character altogether and explaining his story in a game which is packed full of action and adventure im sure if you did this and made sure it was done right with no bugs this time it would bring about a new interest the Dune game world deserves I have researched everything to the best of my abilities Ive checked forum's reviews taken everything into consideration. Everyone wants a new Dune First person dune game with graphics like the last one. All you need to do is check the forums for that answer. But we just want to see it done right. So I hope you take my suggestions into consideration. You've got enough info here to make the best dune game ever. If you do make a sequel to Frank Herbert's Dune or a whole new Dune game, which I hope you, will please make it right and perfect. WELL THATS ABOUT IT LOL, ANYONE ELSE GOT ANYTHING THEY WANT TO ADD, THEN THIS IS THE PLACE TO SAY IT;) KEEP IT REAL 8)
  4. Crap I just did a massive update and the friggen internet turned off and I lost everything :'(
  5. Deep with in the alien ship the duke stood still inside a large room. A couple of metres away The dark lord sat at a table looking completly relaxed, yet still he imposed a sinister fealing in the air which made the duke shiver. What made it worse was the fact the Duke was made to stand during the whole of the meeting, making it seem as though the duke was of no importance. The dark lord coNtinued to go over the database which he held on his datapanel in his right hand. The Dark lord was quiet only speaking when was needed. This only added fear to his sinister apearence. Finally the Duke became sick of of the sharade that the Dark lord was playing. Plucking up enough courage to fight past his fear, the Duke broke the silence. "Is this to be meeting, or im i just to stand here mindlesly until you decide to face me man to..." "Silence!" Roared the dark lord before the duke could finish. "You are in no place to lecture me. You were brought here to disscuss your surrender, nothing else." "We will not surrender." The Duke declared faceing the living fear that stood in front of him. "Ah Duke Atreides how bold you have grown." The Dark one answered calm now, his eary presence growing stronger with every emotion he made the Duke Sucumb to. "The worm beguins to shout, your puny words mean nothing to me. You do not have a choice. Surrender or die." Hey Lord_Johnsonius I have posted a few notes I have about the direction where I am taking the story. Check your message's. ;)
  6. On the Atreides Transport ship the Duke Sat still looking onwards at the huge alien vessel that was growing bigger in his front window. "Kel We will arrives soon prepare yourself." "I am ready, My Duke" Answered Kel suited up in his stealth suite ready to infiltrate the alien ship. The Dukes ship continued to approach eventually a message came over the radio. "Alien Vessel please shut down your main engines. The ship will be taken in automatically from here." "Do as he says." commanded the Duke to his pilot who sat patiently next to him. "As you command, My Duke." responded his pilot as pressed the appropriate buttons. The alien ship locked on its main tractor beam and guided the Dukes ship safely into its docking. Inside the ship a squad of storm troopers lined up in there appropriate formations ready to escort the Duke Atreides to there Lord Darth Slyth. With A sudden compression of air the doors of the Dukes ship opened and he began to walk down the ramp with his escort of his best men. Kel was no where to be seen but inside the Dukes ship he Clinged Flat against the ceiling ready to make his move when the moment arrived. The Storm trooper commander intercepted the Duke "You are to come with us." He stated as he made a hand gesture to the rest stormtrooper squad to take the guns away from the Dukes Guards. One of the guards looked at the Duke as if what to do. The Duke nodded to him in to say that everything was all right. The storm troopers took the guards weapons and the proceeded to escort the Duke and his men out of the docking bay. A remaining bunch of storm troopers then proceeded to search the Dukes ship they searched the ins and outs of everything, But found nothing of interest or value. A storm trooper found a flashing light which blinked on the wall he glanced at it, and thought he heard a noise from above "Hey what was that?" He looked up and there above him was the ships cooling system that gave off a faint humming sound. Another Storm trooper responded to his call "You hear something." "No its nothing, some noise coming from that there, must be the ships cooling mechanism." Im in Kel thought now moving round the ship in a stealthy manner. I must find a computer terminal, then ill be able to get a layout of the whole place, find the main engines and hopefully get some intelligence data. Meanwhile...... The Baron left the Lannsrad council chambers, "So the Duke is trying as a diplomat is he, Mentat have you any ideas how can use this in our favor?" "As a matter of fact I do Baron. At the moment the Duke sits a dangerous situation he is stuck with the unknown enemy. If anything were to go wrong whilst the Duke was in council im sure the consequences would be fatal." "And how would we go about setting this in motion Mentat." "Easily my Baron, simply by making it seem like the atreides are attacking." "Ah Mentat," the baron sniggered. "I see your plan. You will use those captured Atreides fighters against them to make it seem like they are on the attack." "Yes Baron a simple but effective. Plan not only will the duke Atreides in a situation he cannot possibly survive, the whole atreides fleet will be severely wounded under the attack." "Excellent Mentat we must launch this attack as soon as possible before the emperors fleet arrives. When they wont have any one to back them up." "My thoughts exactly, my Baron." The Mentat declared in a grim voice. In private chambers of the Dark Lord Osisus.... Osisus went over the database he had taken from the space guilds ship. It told him everything he wished to know about this galaxy. "So this spice melange is the source of there power. Located on the planet Arrakkis. It is said that this Guild use spice to help them navigate through space, The Benegesirit sisterhood use it to enhance there abilities. So this galaxy is dependent on the spice produced by Arrakis, if I could gain control of this planet then I could seize control of the entire empire." And... this spice It could increase my powers. "How the scales seem to have tipped in my favour." He looked up and peered into the deep void of space with a new goal. Yes the Dark Lord thought I now know what to do.
  7. (Hey Lord_Johnsonius we got a good thing going here, nice updates thanks Keep up the good work.) ;DThe Reverend Mother Moshia sat still in her private chamber. My beloved son Kel she thought. I must find out what's going on with Kel. Pressing a button on her computer she brought up the communications network. A young woman appeared on the screen. "Yes Reverend Mother, how can i help you?" "Yes put me through to Atreidies Palace on Caladan." Replied Moshia. With a sudden disruption the screen changed to another image. It was Mentat Hague. "Ah Mentat Hague, I would like to speak to Kel." "Im sorry but Kel been sent out on an errand. Besides what do want him for. Have you selected him as a part of your breeding program?" The mentat sneered scornfully."How your intelligence department deciphers data is beyond me mentat. I have no wish to enlist kel in the breeding programme besides do you not think that we would have thought of that before now. I did bring him up." "Kel is to noble to fall for any of your schemes witch.""Now now mentat, no need for that. If we wanted Kel we could have by now. We have quite the selection of canadates that i doubt he would complain about. No mentat i just want to talk to him.""Why do you always ring here what is you want witch?" "Dam it he's my son." 'Moshia'"No, woman he's of atreides blood. You just brought him up. How he ended up in your care i have no idea." 'Hague'"He was rescued from the Bene Tleilax during the battle of unrest. If he had stayed with them any longer who knows what they might have done to him. It was already apparent that they had started some form of experiment on him when we found him." 'Moshia'"Reverend Mother Kel is not here, this conversation will not proceed further. Goodbye! With that the screen went blank." 'Hague'"Blast him!" Moshia shouted in the voice. "Every time i get this...this crap! For a mentat he's a fool!" I must contact Kel and find out more about this vision.Standing at the door of the Mentats room the Lady Rahan smiled in amusement."Hague you shouldent be so mean to the woman. After all she did raise the child.""That she did. And a good job she did to. But still shes benegeserit and not to be trusted who knows what shemes she could be up to. Besides I enjoy winding the old bat up." 'Hague'As i thought. She smiled again. 'Rahan'
  8. On The planet of Guidi Prime:The Baron jumped in surprise "play that again!" What happened there Swordmaster Kel completely lost his balance. What devilry is this not even those horrible Bene Gesserit's could match that I must find out."My Baron the emperor has requested that the Harkonen fleet join forces with the other houses at the outer rim of Kaitan. This will of course exclude house Atreides due to its current situation. The emperor wishes for a council." "Yes of course." replied the Baron to his mentat" Help the pitifull Atreides, Mentat what is the odds of the Atreides surviveing a one on one conflict with this alien threat?" Due to its size the Atreides will be for certain, annihilated, my Baron."Sometime later the harkonen fleet arrives at the outer rim of Kaitan. In the grand council chamber of the great emperor. The major houses discuss what is to happen of the alien threat: "Are we to use atomics" asked the speaker of house Ordos."It has been said that atomics have been ruled out unless an alien threat ever came about. This would appear to be such a situation." The Ordos speaker ratted in his strange voice."Yes I realize this but it is still not wise to use such destructive weapons near our own systems. They should be saved until we decide how great this threat really is. If the time comes have no fear I will make the call." Replied the Emperor."Have no worries my emperor, the alien fleet has amassed around the world of Caladan. It is but a planet of water. It would be a small sacrifice compared to the safety of the empire." Interrupted the Baron Harkonen."Its also the hold world baron you heartless beast. You cannot sacrifice such a great house." Answered the House GinazYes he's right the emperor thought they are a great house there popularity continues to grow. So much so they threaten house Corrino. "No we can not afford to lose House Atreides, the alien threat may to great.""Nonsense" the Barron whispered to himself"Do you have something further to add Baron?" asked the emperor overhearing the Baron muttering. Regaining posture the Baron replied, "Yes my lord, what is the current situation with the Atreides?""There was a minor battle for a short period of time however the Atreides now are in a stand off with the alien threat. I have advised that the Atreides send a diplomat to try and resolve the situation until our combined fleets arrive there." Emperor."And they have accepted...a diplomat." Baron Well yes.... Apparently so.... The universal translator had some problems deciphering their dialogue at first but we now have total understanding with their language. They however only agree with the diplomat on the grounds of surrender. "And the Atreides agreed" Smiled the Baron"No they have they have not agreed to surrender. They are merely trying to use this as a chance to negotiate face to face." EmperorOn the Atreides Battle ship Orbiting the Planet Caladan:Kel walked through into the command chamber of the Atreides battle ship to see the old Mentat Hague and the Duke sitting at the strategy table."Ah Kel I see you have returned from your previous mission. It is unfortunate that you return under these circumstances. Im sure the space guild provided everything you needed whilst you were away. Im sorry but there will not be much time for briefing. I have weighed the different possible routes and I believe that this is the best one to take.""It has been arranged with these aliens that we shall try and discuss the current situation the Duke is to act as a diplomat to try and resolve the current situation." "Yes Interrupted the Duke they think that we wish to surrender, I will use this as a means to buy time until the rest of the emperors fleet arrives.""But My Duke, is it wise to go in there your self. Why not send someone else." Asked Kel concerned for the saftey of his Duke. "I understand your concern Old Friend. But there is no one that can negotiate quite like. I would prefer to do it my self and succeed instead of risking another mans life. Besides I will have an escort of my best men. And You Kel will lie in the shadows.""Ahh So I will be the protector in the dark." Replied Kel"No not quite you have a much more important role." Duke"Yes" Mentat Hague finished off "Your mission is to sneak aboard the vessel whilst the duke negotiates. And retrieve as much information about the enemy as possible. You will try and attach a small detonator to the power source of there ship. Intelligence suggests it lies here." Stated the Mentat whilst pointing at a map of the enemies ship. "You are our best man Kel." Mentat "Yes and a good friend." Duke"Now you must use your abilities to the limit. Remember the mission must be completely done in stealth. Other wise the alien threat will be alerted. And no doubt, all chaos will be let lose." Mentat
  9. As the dark man made another would be devastating attack. He thought to himself no this is foolish I cant go on fighting the unknown. It will be my undoing. He thought back to when he first decided to board the ship, how simple it had seemed. He would enter the ship cloud people's minds or destroy those that stood in his way. But this was unexpected. No he thought I must leave this fight and learn about this strong adversary. then I will destroy him. But first I must make sure that this mission is not a total waste.As Kel met each attack he thought to himself. This is making me exhausted, each move I make he counters as if......something guides him. As he continued his battle Kel spotted out of the corner of his eye a small machine. What's this can it be..........A machine, could this dark man be in league with the machines......It cant be......it was so long ago.A small droid sped towards the dark mans ship at a rapid pace hovering just off the floor. The droid flew up the ramp and entered through the entrance of the ship. That's it the dark man thought the seeker droid has done its job. Now I must deal with this unexpected one. As the battle went on it seemed as though it was getting more and more furious. Two masters of different styles fighting as never seen before."You fight well, but now you will see the true power of the dark side" The man dark man ranted, Reaching out with the force the Dark man focussed all of his power and used it to push his adversary. Kel crashed to floor and continued to slide backwards until he eventually grinded to a halt. What was that he thought, he hit me without.....touching? ???Kel shocked :- ollected himself together and moved himself into a crouching stance ready for whatever move the dark man would make next.The dark man stood still and over shadowed Kel making a small laugh to him self. Yes that shocked him he thought, maybe he isn't as powerful as I first thought. Any way it's not over yet, I will return when I have learned more about him and destroy my unexpected adversary. With that the dark man turned and made his way to his ship. Kel looked on at the departing ship. He stood up and an deactivated his shield as the ship proceeded to leave the docking station. As he did Kel thought to himself what happened........and whispered, "What is this.......dark side?"As the dark man navigated his ship towards his master's fleet which had amassed around Caladan. A low-pitched robotic voice could be heard from behind him. "Master Osius the seeker droid has successfully downloaded a collection navigation charts from the alien ship as well as a database of there entire history." "Good" replied Osius "My master is bound to be unpleased with my performance but the information gathered should keep him satisfied. Perhaps this database will provided me other answers." "What kind of answers my Master." Asked Osius's personal droid. "You think to much, the database will perhaps give me the answers to my unexpected friend." Yes he thought the answer to his destruction could well lie in the depths of that database. Osius admired the strange man it was unusual for him to meet some one who could test his skills to the limit and he liked the challenge. That's what had nearly cost him his downfall he could very well have nearly died to the hands of this strange man. As he thought he whispered to himself "My overconfidence was my weakness."
  10. If only we could tempt every dune fan in this entire forum to send cryo an email requesting a patch. Then im sure they would listen. Im surprised that there arnt that many over people out there who would like to develop dune further??? Surley theres got to be someone outthere who's tried modifying the game.
  11. :DMeanwhile in the emporers private chambers on SALUSA SECUNDUS...... "Ah yes I do beleave we will have to deal with these small Atreides pests. They seem to growing more popular as each moment passes in the empire." "Yes I agree something must be done" Replied the emporer sitting back in his high chair as he addressed one of his fellow nobles. Just as the conversation was about to continue the royal messanger abruptly entered the room with an uneasy look of urgency. "My Lord" he shouted "Blast it man cant you see that we are busy. How dare you enter like this." Blazed the emperor in a rage of fury. "Yes... My lord but" The messanger tried to explain. "But...... What quickly explain yourself before I have you executed for your insolence." The emperor said returning his calm. My Lord, a space guild ship, whilst stoping off at Caladan on its usual roter, was attacked by a alien fleet."What.... An alien invasion........." So it has finaly happened the emporer thought to himself inteligence always suspected but an attack here ,now. Every one out!!! the emporer raged "and send me my Mentat" "What about me My Lord" asked the noble who had sat listening to what was going on. Out!!!!! shouted the emporer with such a voice that the ground seemed to shake beneath them.The noble fleed like a small rodent running from a stampeed. The emporer stood gazing at the rooms mantle he rached over and touched a small cube which lay on top. As he touched it a hologram picture ignited against the wall it was father the last emporer of the known universe. As he gazed at the picture he asked. "Father what shall I do" Meanwhile on the planet GIEDI PRIME:Mentat J'invy was showing to his master the Baron Harkonnen the footage of the mysterious dark man and his battle against Sword MAster Kel."Why J'invy this is remarkable who is this dark robed man. He fights like nothing I have ever seen before." Yes Baron i beleave he is of alien origion. Replied J'invy."ALien origion you say , an new threat arives over the face of our lifetime enemy's the stupid Atreides. Maybe J'invy we can use this to our effect. "What do you mean baron" asked Mentat J'invy. I mean i'd like to wipe that stupid smile off the Duke Atreides face." stated the Baron finishing his sentance off with a sinister lough. "Yes I beleave, we will have to look more into this alien threat. Meanwhile I hope this dark man rips the wings off that little rodent Kel." loughed the Baron
  12. Listen right I dont mind you or anyone else posting. Just as long as they keep benefiting the story in a good manner -whats the point in me even bothering trying to write a story if all im gonna get is smart aleck response's. So PEACE MAN hope your next post helps update the story from where it is upto. 8) Ive wasted enough time as it is. So go on have ago. If every one worked together instead of trying to belittle every one with the classic i know best thinking routine, we'd probably have a whole chapter by now!
  13. Ok couple of points As I quoted earlier (As for the holtzman effect lets say the lightsabre could not penetrate the sheild and did not trigger off the atomic reaction. Otherwise the story's gonna be kinda short :-/) I also realise that the cutterray is a short version of the Lasgun which is used like a scalpel. But thats not the point who's to say that a lightsabre has anything to do with either a Lasgun or a cutteray. Do you own either, dident think so...... EITHER LEAVE A DECENT POST TO BENEFIT THE STORY OR DONT BOTHER!! >:( -And that dosent just count for renegade boy it counts for any one else who wants to be a smart arse-
  14. Ok Every one listen im trying to keep the story going on for as long as possible so will everyone try to stop cutting it short. I dont mind updates but try and keep it good and ongoing....... ;D Sly1 your updates good but errr you cut my story short man. But anyway we can do it like this.
  15. If there are any people out there interested in improving Frank Herberts Dune. (The Stealthy 3d FPS)Have a look at this post for some suggestions and make sure you read the email:http://www.dune2k.com/forum/index.php?board=6;action=display;threadid=925
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