exatreide Posted April 5, 2003 Share Posted April 5, 2003 This is the NOTLD dead story i am doing about people on fed2k. Go to Your permission is requested thread in general for more Details.Comments are fine. But only I am writing this as is.Prologue: The first came with out notice a few scattered attacks in the country side against farmers and drifters accounted to animal attacks and domestic disputes.One Became TwoTwo Became ThreeThree Became Four A population explosion soon swept across the county side and into the city like a plague. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 8, 2003 Author Share Posted April 8, 2003 Ok here is the first chapter as of yet. Its not finished yet though. BTW Ryan Sharpie is me. I find the idea of using my own name.....cheesy.Chapter 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 9, 2003 Author Share Posted April 9, 2003 Rest of chaper one, next chapter will be with TMARyan Checked the first door the bell ringing as he entered the door. The shop had been a sporting good shop, but most of everything was stolen off the shelves, He found pistol behind the counter and put it in his pack. Its weight suggested it was loaded but their were no clips anywhere. With disgust Ryan left the shop. He cursed him self for not realizing earlier. Most of downtown would be ransacked, it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 12, 2003 Author Share Posted April 12, 2003 Started new chapter tonightTMAShould be done soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 12, 2003 Author Share Posted April 12, 2003 not done yet, but i think you people deserve a update...why you ask? simple the voices told me to.Chapter Two:TitusClang Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 12, 2003 Author Share Posted April 12, 2003 I forgot to add.Comment or feel the rath of a thousand blades in your pevis.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 12, 2003 Author Share Posted April 12, 2003 Rest Of Tma's Comment or die you filthy bipeds...er...yea..like it almost had before. He closed his eyes and remembered the sight of his family wondering down the street. His hatred nearly consumed him, he wanted to kill every single one of them, he had raised his shot gun up and stopped, He had almost shot his own sister, what had been his sister. How could they have done that? How could they have taken his life, his friends, his family away? Why? What did it? Why did they spare him and take everyone else? Why? Why? Why? Why? Why? He tried to fire, he tried to kill her, but couldn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nemafakei Posted April 12, 2003 Share Posted April 12, 2003 Commas? Inverted commas? Sentence control? Apostrophes?e.g.:A good day. He thought to himself.should be"A good day," he thought to himself.Proper punctuation means people son't have to stop so often to work out how your sentence is supposed to work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 12, 2003 Author Share Posted April 12, 2003 Hows this for punctuation.Bite me Nema. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 12, 2003 Author Share Posted April 12, 2003 if you dont like, you can be my editor :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mihail Posted April 13, 2003 Share Posted April 13, 2003 Good job. :) Coming along great :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 13, 2003 Author Share Posted April 13, 2003 thx doing Acriku next.should be done by moday. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vanguard3000 Posted April 13, 2003 Share Posted April 13, 2003 [quote author=ExAtreides Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 13, 2003 Author Share Posted April 13, 2003 wouldnt it be.Post in notld you lazy ass bum? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Davidu Posted April 13, 2003 Share Posted April 13, 2003 Ex, why don't you use their nicks? I mean are those their real names? We know them better by their nicks... Great work, grim atmosphere... 8)P.S. wil you make one about me too? or you'll let me do it? ;D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 13, 2003 Author Share Posted April 13, 2003 I only have about 3 or four people from europe who sent me their things,so untill i get more people, i will do north american, <|End of post bitten off|> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cobrajc Posted April 15, 2003 Share Posted April 15, 2003 great job!!very freaky....reminds me of resident evil 2 ( the game not the movie) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seal89999 Posted April 19, 2003 Share Posted April 19, 2003 Yo ex when are you gonna get around to another person??? Im lookin forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inoculator9 Posted April 19, 2003 Share Posted April 19, 2003 One for me would be nice to :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seal89999 Posted April 19, 2003 Share Posted April 19, 2003 Yeah thats what i was gettin at. When am i up Ex i put in my info and stuff :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exatreide Posted April 19, 2003 Author Share Posted April 19, 2003 been busy, but will get to it sooner or later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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