chatfsh Posted April 16, 2006 Share Posted April 16, 2006 The low roar of the crowd grew louder in the cramped arena. Spectators crowded into the aisles and walkways making passage impossible. In the lower areas closer to the stage, the privileged class enjoyed more spacious accommodations. Between them and the rabble was a thick layer of armed guards. They moved through the crowd with menacing scowls, shoving and kicking back the crowd as if they were dogs. The guards were somewhat ceremonious since the force field was the primary barrier between the nobles and the proletariat. But history had taught them a bloody lesson, since then the guards served as a back-up defense. In a place such as this, it was imperative that order be maintained. Some of the most prominent citizens of Nethic would be in attendance, including Nethic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dunenewt Posted April 16, 2006 Share Posted April 16, 2006 Good stuff so far. It's nice to see someone new in FanFic :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 17, 2006 Author Share Posted April 17, 2006 Nothing like a hearty execution to start the day... Continued Lady Vaush Bastionli, second daughter of Count Larrs Bastionli, and fourth in line to the throne of Ti-Laros, listened intently as the Mobias agent expounded on the wonders and capabilities of the new industrial software that promised to increase operating efficiencies by up to 75%. The process engineer proceeded to explain how virtually all of the manual functions within the business flow would be automated with this cutting edge technology.Here conducting family business, Vaush was one of fifty potential investors who had arrived on Patheis this morning to attend the presentation. Count Larrs Bastionli, reigning czar of Ti-Laros, requested that she attend, wishing her to hone her negotiating skills. This was the first major deal she Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 18, 2006 Author Share Posted April 18, 2006 Nothing like a hearty execution to start the day...Continued part 3CHAPTER 4Vaush regained consciousness with a throbbing headache. Slowly, sounds of her surroundings began filtering through her awareness. Outdoor scents were breathed in and analyzed. Sounds and scents of a rain forest registered on her brain. Where am I? she thought as she willed her eyes open? They fluttered as they adjusted to the sunlight.Laying upon the soft ground, she visually took in the surroundings. A green canopy of trees blocked a portion of the sun, which explained the relative coolness in the tropical setting. She wondered how in the world she ended up here. Despite the pain in her head, she forced herself to sit up. Like a flash, the memories of the exploding transport came back to her. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 18, 2006 Author Share Posted April 18, 2006 Nothing like a hearty execution to start the day...Continued part 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 18, 2006 Author Share Posted April 18, 2006 Nothing like a hearty execution to start the day...Continued part 5 Two more hours managed to crawl by, but the rain poured on. Comron remained deep in a restful sleep as Vaush paced the cabin. Comron Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 22, 2006 Author Share Posted April 22, 2006 Nothing like a hearty execution to start the day... continued "The Attack" Awakening with a start, Vaush lifted her head from the damp earth. She didn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 23, 2006 Author Share Posted April 23, 2006 Nothing like a hearty execution to start the day... continued "Death of a King" As the Nethicaen ship blazed through space toward Patheis, King Crausin Van Laven stood poised at the bow as if willing the vessel to fly faster. It had been too long since he Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 27, 2006 Author Share Posted April 27, 2006 Continued.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 27, 2006 Author Share Posted April 27, 2006 continued...."fearing that might be the only thing holding his cracked skull together."When Crausin landed on Patheis with his small army of searchers, he immediately contacted the prefect and the Mobias EIC. The prefect kindly informed him that Count Larrs Bastionli was also joining the search operation and begged that they be civil toward one another as he wanted no additional bloodshed. The truly startling news was that Larrs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 29, 2006 Author Share Posted April 29, 2006 continued....Vaush emerged from the water like a bronzed goddess. After spending four hours at a brisk pace traversing the forest, Vaush felt exhausted. Comron showed no signs of weariness as he forged his way through the wilderness. Despite her best effort, she Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 29, 2006 Author Share Posted April 29, 2006 Continued...Comron's dark side General Stland approached Crausin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chatfsh Posted April 29, 2006 Author Share Posted April 29, 2006 Continued...Ascension of the elite theoryDetermined to take advantage of every minute of daylight, Comron pressed on relentlessly taking very brief breaks in between. In his opinion, they couldn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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chatfsh Posted May 12, 2006 Author Share Posted May 12, 2006 Comron prepares a poisoned drink Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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