Jack Leaf Posted October 4, 2003 Share Posted October 4, 2003 Here we are. 6 pages with Arial font, size 12. Yeah, the creature in this story IS Yautja from Predator movies. When designing this story, predator sounded the most logical. Making new samelike would sound stupid, I think. At least it's Predator fan fiction now. :PThe beginning is way better than the end. I'm sorry for that, but maybe I will fix the end sometime in the future... yeah...Sampsa LehtiPresentsTamed HunterI have experienced one thing in my life that no one else has. It Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jack Leaf Posted October 6, 2003 Author Share Posted October 6, 2003 Hmph. The text is messed up, because Word messed with the symbols. Here's .doc file in zip.[attachment archived by Gobalopper] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apollyon Posted October 6, 2003 Share Posted October 6, 2003 The actual story, while very basic, is quite enjoyable. Your language needs some work, but that's understandable considering your age and that English is not your first language. :)On the whole, very good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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